My discovery!

My discovery!
When I’ve been writing the story for Book 3 of Serena’s Adventures, I’ve been observing my character, rather than being my character.
I haven't been fully immersed in the action taking place on the page. The result is disjointed writing which needs to be re-evaluated each time I come back to working on it.
This has meant carrying out a fundamental reconstruction of the story.
It has been frustrating knowing the information, on the page, needs to be re-written.
Normally, I become my character and the writing flows onto the page, with only a few edits needed. It is also quicker to complete a story with flowing writing.
When I write my next story I will ask my secret helper, my subconscious, how I can create the best conditions to produce flowing writing.
What have you been learning?